The pie chart and the line graph illustrate how much money was spent on three methods of watching films from 2005 to 2011.

The pie chart and the line graph provide key information about the budget spent on three types of watching films. From 2005 to 2011.

Overall

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, it is clear from the graph that the cinema has raised eventually, it recorded the highest funds for 14 pounds in 2011 ,

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legal downloads declined dramatically to around 2 pounds from 2005 to 2007.DVD remained stable in 2007

as well as

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2009, the money that was spent was about 7 pounds.

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the pie chart DVD rental was recorded as the

higher

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percentage in 2005 at 64 per

cent

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, 2011 registered a low at 56 per

cent

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, going to the cinema reached 30 per

cent

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in 2005

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, in 2011 there was a decline rate of 18 proportion . Compared to watching online there was a significant rise in 2011 about 3 times higher from 6 per

cent

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to 26 per

cent

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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5 paragraphs

152 words

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The pie chart and the line graph illustrate how much money was spent on three methods of watching films from 2005 to 2011.

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