The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.

The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared to those who watched sports, in 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of women between the ages of 16 and 25 in a particular country, engaging in 6 different sports actively and passively in 2000.
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, tennis and basketball caught women's attention far more than badminton and horse riding and racing. In detail,
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enjoying being spectators (60 %) is double of participating (30 %) directly in tennis.
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, they prefer to play golf as much as they want to play tennis with 30 %.
Females
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avoid horse riding both as spectators and players with approximately 5 % of the total share. Moving into statistics basketball, there is a small difference between the participants and watchers which are 55 % and 50 % respectively. Regarding gymnastics, almost twice of
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chose to participate rather than being watchers with 20 and around 9 per cent. Badminton and horse riding and racing saw far less interest by
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with around 5 per cent
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watching,
in contrast
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participating showed approximately 10 per cent for both sports.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words females with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation
  • viewership
  • percentage
  • demographic
  • sports culture
  • societal norms
  • accessibility
  • influence
  • trends
  • implications
  • health benefits
  • community programs
  • initiatives
  • historical data
  • global comparisons
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