The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There is a known fact that inflammation exists no matter what. The aim of
this
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report is to provide information about different
breads’
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breads
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prices in one European country in a
perdios
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period
of time from 2001 to 2006.
Given
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The given
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chart provides information about four types of bread and it can be seen that in 2001 all prices were similar. Breads with
the
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apply
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price’s
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price
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rapid
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apply
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increases were Wholegrain’s which increased by 120% and Brown’s by 150% in the year of 2001 to 2002,
while
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Rye’s
cost
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has
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decreased
nearly
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by nearly
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10%. In the period of 2002 to 2006 White’s
cost
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has been steadily increasing every year by approximately 11%. For two years straight (2003 - 2004) Rye’s has kept its price stable at
0,6eur
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0.6eur
,
same
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the same
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as in the year
of
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apply
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2001.
While
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from 2002 to 2003 the costs’ of three breads (Brown, White and Rye)
has
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have
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been increasing, Wholegrain’s
cost
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had
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has
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rapid decrease
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rapidly decreased
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. Summarizing data, Rye’s
cost
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has stayed most stable at approximately 0,6eur,
while
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Wholegrain’s
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wholegrains
Wholegrain
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has had rapid increase and decrease from 2001 to 2003, which resulted in White’s steady increase throughout the whole period of 2001 to 2006.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cost with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 3 times.
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