The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant .
The line graph presents information about the
number
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of
stores
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that closed and the
number
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of new opening shops in a country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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, the
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of
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that opened was at its peak in 2011, and it has been decreasing until 2018.
On the other hand
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, the
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of shops which are closed was at its highest level in 2013. The
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of opened
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in 2011 was approximately 9000 ,
then
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it less from that to less than 4000
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in the first period. The three years after the
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of opened shops has been increased and reached about 6000
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. In 2014, the
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of opened and closed
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was approximately the same. After that, the
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of opened
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have been decreased to less than 40000 in 2018. For the closed
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, in 2011, it was over 6000, and it had many ups and downs until 2014, which was approximately the same. After that in 2015, it decreased to less than a thousand. In the next period, it increased until it reached around 5000 in 2018.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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