The map below is of town of Garldson, a new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of town of Garldson, a new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below is of town of Garldson, a new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the
two
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possible sites for a supermarket in the town of Garldson, which has a
populatin
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population
of 65000.
Overall
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, it is evident that the first location is in a rural area in the countryside, and the second location is in the town centre ,which is called
"no
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traffic zone". There is a railway line that connects the
two
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sites.
Initialy
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Initially
, site 1 is placed in the top-left corner of the map, between the railway and the main road that leads to the city of Hinton, which has a population of 10000.
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,
this
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location is close to the residential block.
On the other hand
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, option 2 is located in the traffic-free area which
linked
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with Cransdon(population 29000) and Brandson (population 15000) by
two
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main roads,
this
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area is surrounded by the housing zone ,and it is at a small distance from the industrial region. The railway line crosses the city from the bottom left to the top right, linking the
two
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spots together.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • foot traffic
  • local traffic
  • visibility
  • suitability
  • residential areas
  • main highway
  • convenience shoppers
  • shopping habits
  • attraction
  • characteristics
  • potential locations
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