International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Are the problems that international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own Knowledge or experience.

These days, many people prefer travelling rather than staying in a certain place. Many

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tourism

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would like to discuss the

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which were faced by the tourism industry and the advantages for

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international travelers which are worth considering.

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create employment

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uneducated individuals.

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, they can stay in their own home and

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does not

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far away

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job seeking.

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wants to enjoy the view of

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and do more

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hiking at that time they need some basic

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and if the locally available people provide them

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obviously we can gain foreign currency and

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the monetary terms in the context of Nepal.

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travellers

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can face

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problem

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in

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language they need

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guidance .

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, they get a chance to know the cultures and traditions of a specific region.

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, they know more about the

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of history.

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is a famous place and full of history about the

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Nepal. In conclusion, many international

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can exchange their money and it helps to uplift the condition of

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the country

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in monetary terms .

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many

travellers

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can face a

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in understanding language

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they can hire a guide and

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their travelling views.