The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the changes in some household types in Canada from 1984 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the

houeshold

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household

types

changaes

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changes

over a 16-year period from 1984 to 2020 in Canada.

Overall

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, it is noticeable that the one

person

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people

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household

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the household

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had

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increased over the given period.

On the other hand

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non-dependent

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children

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decreased gradually . In 1984, in one-family

housholds

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households

non-dependent

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children

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had the highest number compared to

others

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other

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categories. Which had almost 50

percentage

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per cent

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Whereas

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Lone

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parent

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parents

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had below 5

percenatge

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per cent

. it had the least number

than

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both No

children

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and dependent

children

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Between 1984 and 2020,

one

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the

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person category started at 6

percentage

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per cent

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and

shaply

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quickly

increased to

reached

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12.

Nevertheless

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non-dependent

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children

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went down from 52% to

neraly

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nearly

36%.

While

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apply

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non-dependent

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children

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fluctuated from 10 to 9

percentage

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per cent

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Vocabulary: Replace the words non-dependent, children with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

117 words

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