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The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.(Huseyn 2)

The table below shows the number of full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2020/21 and 2021/22.(Huseyn 2)
The provided table depicts the
number
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 of full-time
students
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 from India who studied at various UK universities during the academic years 2020/21 and 2021/22.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Coventry
University
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 had the highest
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,
while
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 the most significant percentage increase occurred at Sheffield
University
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. Coventry
University
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 had 2,390
students
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 in 2020/21, and
this
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 figure rose sharply to 5,290
students
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 in the next academic year, representing the highest numerical growth of 2,900
students
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. The increase in the
number
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 of
students
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 was greatest at Sheffield
University
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, accounting for 187.7%, and the
change
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 in the
number
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 of
students
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 was 1,530 at that
university
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.
In addition
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, the maximum
number
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 of
students
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 was 3,505 in 2020/21; it was 5,290 in 2021/22 among all universities. The lowest percentage
change
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 was at BPP
University
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, making up 46.8%,
whereas
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 the least
change
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 in the
number
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 of
students
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 was at the
University
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 of Leicester, accounting for 1,215.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, university, change with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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