The pie charts illustrate the comparison of expenditures on seven different types of categories in the year 1966 and1996 in America.
Overall
, in the beginning of the period, the highest amount of expense was paid for food, Linking Words
while
the least number of expenses Linking Words
spent
on computers. Add a missing verb
was spent
Moreover
, after three decades car sales became the biggest part of the economy, and Linking Words
the
book sales reduced Correct article usage
apply
in
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by
considerable
amount as the smallest part of sales.
In 1966, in America citizens paid Correct article usage
a considerable
highest
amount Change the article
the highest
on
food Change preposition
for
was
44% and, it remarkably dropped to 14% after 30 years. Books, petrol and Unnecessary verb
apply
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
also
fell from 6%,9%,9% to 1%,8%,Linking Words
8
% respectively in 1996. When compared with 1966, expenses on books Correct word choice
and 8
was
significantly declined by 5% in 1996.
In 1966, expenses Unnecessary verb
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on
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for
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the car
car
was 23% and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
it
increased remarkably in 1996 to almost half (45%) and Correct pronoun usage
they
restaurants
expenditures Change the noun form
restaurant
was
doubled in 1996 from 7% to 14%. People's Unnecessary verb
apply
intresting
was on computers grew during the three decades from 1% to 10%.Correct your spelling
interesting
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