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Writing Samples
Band 5.5

You have missed some important papers accidently in a taxi. Write a letter to the manager of the Taxi company. In your letter: ⦁ Give the details of your journey ⦁ Explain why those papers are important for you ⦁ Suggest what can the manager do

Dear Manager I am writing to inquire about some important papers, which I
accidently
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accidentally
 left in a taxi of your company,
While
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 I was travelling from Oakville to Hamilton.
Moreover
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, It was
3rd
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the 3rd
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 of May 2025, when I booked your taxi service through the website
named
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Easyride.com. I was travelling from Oakville to Hamilton for my work, the car was white in colour and it was
Hyundia
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Hyundai
 Elantra with the number plate number "ABCD 1234".
Furthermore
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, Those documents are very vital for me, it's for my upcoming presentation at my workplace and I need to submit
it
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them
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 before
15th
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the 15th
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 of May. I have worked almost a whole month to prepare that
paper work
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paperwork
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. I would appreciate it if you could send
any
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a
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 taxi driver to drop
of
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off
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 my documents at my address, which is 1229 Marlborough
court
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Court
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, Oakville, ON, L6H3B6. To add on, I am ready to pay extra charges for
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 facility.
However
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, if that's not possible you can provide me with the
relavant
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relevant
 pick-up location. I will pick it up as soon as I get time. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Safwan Vahora

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general
Consider proofreading your letter to fix minor grammatical errors, such as 'Hyundia' which should be 'Hyundai' and ensure proper punctuation.
tone
Make sure to use a more formal tone consistently throughout the letter. For example, using 'Moreover' at the beginning of a sentence may not fit perfectly in this context.
content
Try to provide a little more context about how you felt when you lost the papers; it can help in emphasizing their importance and could make your appeal stronger.
content
The letter has a clear purpose and structure, outlining the journey, the importance of the papers, and a suggestion for retrieval.
formatting
You have used appropriate salutations and closings for a formal letter.
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