The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four counthies in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four counthies in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four counthies in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart displays the percentage of
men
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and
women
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between 60 to 64 working in four nations in the years 1970 and 2000.
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, there are more
men
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employed than there are
women
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in all four countries for both periods. There are fewer working
men
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for the year 2000 than in 1970
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it remains about the same for the
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in both years. The working population aged 60 to 64 was the highest in Japan in the 1970s at a whopping 85% for elderly males and 43% for
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Belgium had the lowest number of elderly females for both years, at 8% and 7% respectively. In the 1970s, 79% of Belgian
men
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in that age group were employed but
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dropped drastically by about three-quarters to just 19% in the 2000s. In Australia, there are about four times more
men
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in the workforce than there are
women
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in the 1970s compared to about two times more in the millennials. In the states, the number of employed elderly
men
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fell by just a quarter from 73% to 55%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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