The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the
population
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in cities of four Asian
countries-Philippines
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countries
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, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from the
year
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1970 to 2020,
projections
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with projections
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for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, all the countries have seen an upward trend of people living in urban areas. For two nations, Malaysia and Indonesia have shown similar upward trends in
the
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apply
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population
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growth in every decade. They began with 30% and 15%
population
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approximately which reached 75% and 50% in the
year
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2020 and projected as 80% and 60% by the
year
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2040.
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, Thailand has seen a steady increase from nearly 18%
urban
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in urban
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people to 30% in the
year
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2020.
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, predicting a similar rise reaching up to 45% by the
year
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2040.
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, for
Philippines
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the Philippines
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, the trend was upward and downward. The Philippines began with nearly 30% people in the
year
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1970 which increased to 50% in 1990.
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, there was a decline in the next 20 years
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reducing the
population
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to 40% and a small increase of 5% seen till 2020.
This
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was projected that a steady increase
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be seen to 55% in the
year
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2040.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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