The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.

The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart compares the proportion of 4 divers transportations usage throughout the commuting to work in one of European city in 3 separate years 1960, 1980 and 2000. The unit is measured in the percentage.
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of usage rates for four different modes of transportation to work in European cities in the years 1960, 1980 and 2000.
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, the rate of popularity of cars significantly increased throughout the period in Europe cities,
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bike usage and walking to work gradually declined. The buses experienced some
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fluctuations, but people preferred to ride in an average percentage during the three particular years. In 1960, most citizens reached work by walking about 30%, and
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declined drastically for the next two decades to about 16%,
at the end
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of the period it reached around 10%.
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to that, at the beginning of the period, around 25% of people preferred bikes as their transport method and it dropped to approximately 20% before falling in 2000 to around 6%. In 1990, the
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number of people travelled by car, but it rose remarkably over the next three decades to about 23%, and the figure plummeted to approximately 35% in 2000 as the highest number of travellers
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all. When compared with other modes of transport the buses had relatively constant popularity with some fluctuations between about 15% to 25% during the four decades.

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