You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town to the writer of the article

Dear Sir, I would like to seek your attention to your recent article in the national newspaper, in which you stated that the

town

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centres

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in the country look similar to each other.

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, in my opinion, I disagree with some of your statements.

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, the

town

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centres

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, as you said,

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are

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same

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the same

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although

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there

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infrastructure is different in many of the cities.

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as, in some cities

town

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centres

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are made up of wood like in

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the jammu

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jammu

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Jammu

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and

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kashmir

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Kashmir

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area as per the weather of the state. But like in north

india

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India

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, the buildings are made up with

balcony

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balconies

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andmore

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and more

open space.

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, there are markets near the

town

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centres

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in some

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the

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areas, but

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some places, shopping malls are far away from the city.

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, there are more gyms and schools in some of the towns, and

on the other hand

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, there is not even 1 school and gym

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the city. I wanted you to pay attention to these points

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so that you can add additional points to your article and people will not be guided wrong. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully. Manpreet Sohal

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coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your ideas more clearly into separate paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea to improve clarity.

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Expand on your points with more specific examples and details to strengthen your argument and response.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the opening and closing to better engage the reader and provide a stronger conclusion.

task achievement

You've shown a good attempt at addressing the article's points and provided contrasting views from your town.

suitable writing tone

Your tone is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for a letter to an editor.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

191 words

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