The chart plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plan presents and shows a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.
This
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essay will summarise that and compare the two plans.
Overall
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, Porth Harbour now has lots of changes compared to 2000. There are many facilities where added to the place land many facilities places have been changed. On the west
side
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, showers and toilets were added next to the car parking.
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, fishing boats and marina ( private yachts) have switched their places. On the north
side
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, in 2000, there was only a dock but there are two docks now.
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,on the south
side
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, cafes and shops were added to the lifeboat which is near the castle in 2000 and the hotel now. On the east
side
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, the castle has been changed into a hotel, and the public beach has been changed into a private one for the hotel. There are some facilities that have not changed their places, like the lifeboats, passenger ferries, car parking, showers and toilets and the public beach.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • harbour (or harbor)
  • docks
  • shipping lanes
  • warehouses
  • recreational areas
  • infrastructure
  • additions
  • removals
  • facilities
  • environmental sustainability
  • economic impact
  • local community
  • capacity
  • technological advancements
  • industrial shipping
  • recreational use
  • surrounding infrastructure
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