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Writing Samples
Band 3

When people need to complain about a product or poor service, some prefer to complain in writing and others prefer to complain in person. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is rather so difficult for me to answer the question
how
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i
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I
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 prefer to complain, in writing or in
person
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 because
sometime
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sometimes
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i
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I
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 do not have a choice. in some
case
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 sometimes
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I
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choice
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choose
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complain
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to complain
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 to
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person
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a person
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 and sometimes
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 use writing.
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,
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 believe that every option
have
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 advantages.
From
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 the one side if you complain by writing
mybe
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maybe
you can just send by email and explain what you feel about
they
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what they
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 serve. And the second is
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 think it is the best way to explain personally,
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 do not like to complain about anything
especially
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 to
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person
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a person
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. And you know if you would
to
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apply
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complain
face
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 to
face
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, you have to ride to the company and
that is
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 so far away. And
i
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I
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 believe that every
complain
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complaint
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have
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has
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a benefits
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benefits
a benefit
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.
first,
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every
complain
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complaint
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 you use
have
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has
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a
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apply
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feedback and sometimes can
more
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be more
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 effective. I have
experince
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experience
 if you would to complain to some company, sending a company a letter you can
getting
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get
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a
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apply
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feedback
around
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for around
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 one month. And if you complain
face
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 to
face
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 is often
can
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apply
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more effective. In conclusion,
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I
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 think if
i
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I
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would
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had
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to
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apply
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complain about
product
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a product
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 or poor
servise
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service
i
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I
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will
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would
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 do it
to
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in
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person
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a person
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,
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however
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however,
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 if
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face to
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a face-to-face
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face
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 conversation is impossible
i
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I
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 think
i
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I
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 have nothing left but to send a letter or write e
mail
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e-mail
 there.

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task achievement
Try to clarify your opinion in the introduction by stating which option you prefer and why.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to organize your paragraphs more clearly, each one focusing on a specific point.
coherence and cohesion
Pay attention to spelling and grammar, as errors can make your message less clear — for example, 'mybe' should be 'maybe', and 'servise' should be 'service'.
task achievement
You effectively communicated that you see benefits in both methods of complaining, which shows depth in your thinking.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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