Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (For example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, advances in technology

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enabled the governments, police and other

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detective

agencies to keep a check on the

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of ordinary citizens. With the presence of security

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and

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of

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cell phones

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, a

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whereabouts can be tracked easily. In my opinion, it is highly beneficial in controlling the criminal

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taking place in a region, but it can

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be harmful. The essay

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highlights the merits of

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developments

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the prospective drawbacks with valid reasons,

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and examples. It is worth considering, that the security

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certainly control the criminal

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taking place in a region. It acts as a

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deterrent

for a criminal. A person may think twice before breaking into a building or stealing a car.

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, the money heist at 'The Central Bank of India' by a group of burglars was recorded in the

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placed in the building, which helped the police

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the case and

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the robbers.

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is applicable to

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mobile phones. By referring

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call logs the location of the suspect and the victim can be tracked easily. It is most advantageous for the parents, as it enables them to keep

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track of their children's

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.

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, the use of modern gadgets comes with some drawbacks. Security

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invade the privacy of individuals, especially in those countries where human rights are ignored. People become more conscious in meetings and gatherings, as their

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are being recorded in

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around.

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people upload their personal information and pictures on various social media sites, unaware these can be misused by others or the service provider for their personal gains.

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, the photograph of girls can be tampered

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used on porn sites. In conclusion, it is certain that more and more devices will be introduced in future for

monitering

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monitoring

people. It is our responsibility, to evaluate new technology and decide

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use it or not. It is irrefutable to stop the crimes from

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happening

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devices can be helpful in controlling them.