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The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. N.

The graph below shows the number of international graduates from UK universities in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. N.
The provided graphs display the percentage of international
students
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 that graduated in 2000 and 2015. Looking at the
overall
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 perspective, it can be seen that all academies had increased,
likewise
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, London University had the most significant growth. Controversially, Bristol University experienced the smallest increase among all universities.
Although
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, in 2000 Cambridge University had the greatest amount of international
students
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 (around 15%), in 2015 the greatest number of international
students
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 studied in Oxford (precisely 25%). Between 2000 and 2015 London experienced the most significant rise among all other universities from 4% to exactly 20%. At the start of the research in 2000, the percentage of international
students
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 in Bath was around 7%.
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, it increased steadily between 2000 and 2015 to 12%. In conclusion, At the start 3 academies with the highest number of exchange
students
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 were: Cambridge (15%), Oxford (14%) and Cardiff (10%). In the end,
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the 3
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universities with the highest amount of international
students
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 are Oxford (25%), Cambridge (23%) and London (20%).

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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