The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The diagram below describes the changes around the West Park Secondary School. The images are about three different periods with a distance of thirty years one with each other.
Overall
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, it’s noticeable that during the time the space built by man increased,
while
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the grass fields were reduced. The first thing we can see is that the houses have disappeared since 1980 to leave space for the car park and a science block near the school building.
In contrast
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, the school building remains unchanged during the years,
such
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as the main road.
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, since 1980, it got the science block located on the left of the construction. The major variation is on the left side of the map, in which is clear the rise of the car park, which in 1980 was only one in four of the half, whilst the farmland was one in two of the square.
At the end
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of 2010, the place of the parking was jumped to the whole side, reducing sports fields and the playground, which are concentrated in the lowest middle of the right part.

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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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