In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some

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the ownership of

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home

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is an important matter. In

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these

countries

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it is very important to own your own

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rather than renting it. It might be indifferent for some, but for these people it

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. Why is that the case? you might wonder. I think it is because your

home

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is supposed to be exactly what it sounds like, your

home

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. As a human I think we long after having stuff to call our own, doesn'

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matter what it is, but humans

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always want to claim ownership.

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is nothing new and it has been like

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through

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human history, like colonies

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, which later once again became the same country as before

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by its own inhabitants. People

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always want to be the

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to decide what happens to them and when you rent your

home

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you can'

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even paint it without the

owners

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permission. If you as a person are renting an apartment there might be a lot of stressors in your life. A scratched wal can cause you a major headache

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because the wal was not yours. The bedroom you are currently sleeping in might not be available as long as you hope, things happen in life and maybe the next landlord won'

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want to have you as a tenant. In

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, not owning your

home

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could be a relief when it comes to your

finance

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. As a

renter

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you won'

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have to pay

mortgage

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, take loans or spend an awful lot of money on buying the property. You wouldn'

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have to worry about the

house

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market crashing or a natural disaster destroying your expensive

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line, as a human I feel like we need to have a

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and calling it your own can make that more special. I personally would rather own my house, because

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whatever happens it is on me and no one else.