The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The line chart presents the results of a questionnaire or a survey about people’s
coffee
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and
tea
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purchasing and drinking habits in the
last
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4
weeks
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in five cities in Australia (Sydney,Melbourne,Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart) and it is divided into 3 categories: people who bought fresh
coffee
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, or bought instant
coffee
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, or went to a cafe’ for
coffee
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or
tea
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.
Overall
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, the
number
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of nations who bought fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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is the lowest in all cities.
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of communities who went to a cafe’ for
coffee
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or
tea
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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is higher in all places except the city of
Adelaide
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.
To begin
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with, the
number
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of people who bought fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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was at its highest percentage in Sydney, it was about 44% of city residents,
while
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it was the lowest in
Adelaide
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and Brisbane approximately 34%.
Moreover
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,the total of people who bought instant
coffee
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is higher than those who bought fresh
coffee
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in all downtowns.The highest percentage was 54% in Hobart, after that in Brisbane about 53%.
On the other hand
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, Sydney has the lowest percentage about 46%.
Additionally
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, Melbourne has the
number
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of society who went to a cafe’ for
coffee
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or
tea
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in the
last
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4
weeks
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approximately about 63%. And the lowest rate was in
Adelaide
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about 49%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, on the other hand".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, weeks, adelaide, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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