The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts show projections for global production by sector in 2040 and 2060. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The Pie charts display the
production
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of different sectors by 2040 and the expectation for 2060.
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, what
stand
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out from the graphics
are
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is
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that services, and manufacturing, are the sectors with the biggest
proportion
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and materials is the sector with the
least
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lowest
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percentage in both years. Turning to Services, Manufacturing and Info-Com Tech, they are the sectors of the economy with the biggest
proportion
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of
production
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with 40%, 31%, and 15% respectively by 2040, and forecasting an increment of 1% in Services and technology and 2% in manufacturing in 2060. Regarding
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Materials, it will be the sector with the least
proportion
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of activity, with 3% in 2040 and the projection to increase 1% in 2060 reaching 4%. Agriculture will represent only 4% of the
production
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and the expectation
to
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decrease
3
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% and will be the least activity in 2060 with only 1%. Energy will have a
proportion
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of 7% of the economy and will decrease
2
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% in the following 20 years reaching 5% of the
production
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.

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Linking words: Add more linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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