In some countries, there is an increase in number of parents choosing home education for their children. Do the advantages of home education outweigh its disadvantages?

It is widely acknowledged that a growing number of parents tend to choose

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education

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for their

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in some countries.

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that the

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disadvantages

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outweigh its

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. Admittedly, it is

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beneficial

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cultivating

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their learning

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. It is the fact that

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learn the knowledge by themselves is boring. Most of the

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,

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self-displine

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self-discipline

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can mention the learning progress of

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in

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can read the English vocabulary book with their

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at

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cannot feel alone. Meanwhile, parents and

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also

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can foster their relationship.

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, students can

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in learning.

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education

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can allow

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study

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without any

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provide

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time

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slot

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for students to follow the

schedle

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schedule

to learn.

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, people can learn freely at

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according to

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their ability.

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can

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to

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know their

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of

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learning.

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cannot learn

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due to

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. It is

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crucial

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that

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skills

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play

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indispensable role in

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children's

growth because of workforce is

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on

communiation

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communication

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.

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only learn by themselves at

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, there is nobody

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with them.

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children

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can

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with their

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classmates

, which can enhance their

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skills

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, for

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example

, sharing their daily stories with

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others, having group

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discussions

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and

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with classmates. During the processing,

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can be active

to talk

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in talking

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with people and

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problem

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by

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communication

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. In the long term,

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easily enter the workforce and

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promising

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career

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can

learning

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more knowledge at

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, there

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many different subject

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also

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quanlifaication

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qualification

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can follow up

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children'

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ability to

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different homework for them. There is no doubt that

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can do the homework to make improve

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on

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teacher'

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evaluation.

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home

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education

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can cultivate

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learning interest and learning without

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limited

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,

children

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can have

communication

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skills

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and learn

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deeper knowledge at

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