The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustrated statistics show the

overall

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demands of mobile and fixed phone subscriptions between 2005 and 2025. They're

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divided

additionally

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by the nations

Eritrea

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India

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, the UK and

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Urugay

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Uruguay

to help provide a decent comparison between different regions of the world. At first glance, we will have a closer look at the development of the fixed lines. The amount of cable-bound telecommunication has been on a relatively stable niveau during the analyzed years.

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, there is a slightly decreasing trend recognizable in the UK,

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Urugay

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Uruguay

the participation in fixed telephony is rising. In both states, there are relatively high percentages of households with a cable-based connection. In the less industrial developed states like

Eritrea

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and

India

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, the number of connected households is almost vanishing. A whole different image is shown

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when looking at the mobile phone subscription graph for the same four countries. In the year 2005, we were already in an industrial age. So we could conclude, that the technology of mobile communication has already arrived in our daily lives.

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it is interesting to see, that in the Commonwealth states, the amount of subscriptions was already at a high level in the year 2005 with fewer changes until 2015. The presence in everyday life, as mentioned before could be recognized

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when looking at the lines of

Eritrea

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India

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and

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Urugay

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Uruguay

. What you can see is a delay of 5 to 10 years in

participation

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the participation

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of mobile communications technology with a strong rise in

India

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and

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Urugay

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Uruguay

. Only in the state of

Eritrea

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, the development still remains at a low level.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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