The map below shows the development of the village of Ryrmouth between 1995 and present.

The two plans present the significant changes of

specific

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a specific

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village called Ryemouth compared to the years 1995 and now.

Overall

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, the modifications have made

village

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the village

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more urban and residential with added accommodations and entertaining facilities. The west side of

map

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the map

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have

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been reconstructed majorly. Additional houses

added

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to the

north-west

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side of

village

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the village

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. Shop sectors have been replaced with contemporary

restorants

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restaurant

spots.

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, the

harbor

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for fishing boats has been eradicated

for making

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biodiversity

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apply

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secure ,

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fishing

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market has been removed

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of erecting apartments along the sea.

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, when we look to the

another

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side of Ryemouth ,

it is clear that

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farmland became to golf centre. The trees in the forest have been chopped down and

has

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been

facelitated

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facilitated

with

tennis

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a tennis

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court

instead

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. Currently, available hotel provides car parking for private individuals.

Cafe

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remains intangible .

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May 19, 2025

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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