The map below shows the development of the village of Ryrmouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryrmouth between 1995 and present.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Ryrmouth between 1995 and present.
The two plans present the significant changes of
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village called Ryemouth compared to the years 1995 and now.
Overall
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, the modifications have made
village
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the village
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more urban and residential with added accommodations and entertaining facilities. The west side of
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have
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been reconstructed majorly. Additional houses
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to the
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side of
village
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. Shop sectors have been replaced with contemporary
restorants
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restaurant
spots.
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, the
harbor
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for fishing boats has been eradicated
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biodiversity
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secure ,
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fishing
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market has been removed
instead
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of erecting apartments along the sea.
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, when we look to the
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side of Ryemouth ,
it is clear that
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farmland became to golf centre. The trees in the forest have been chopped down and
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been
facelitated
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facilitated
with
tennis
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court
instead
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. Currently, available hotel provides car parking for private individuals.
Cafe
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remains intangible .

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