Some people think that government spending on the restoration of old buildings in cities should be stopped. Instead they should spend the money for housing and road development. To what extent do you agree?

The restoration of old

building

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buildings

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in metro cities

demand

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expebditure

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expenditure

.

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,

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preserving the historical house is essential. Some people believe the

governement

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government

should

utillize

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utilise

the money to improve the housing sector and

road

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. I completely agree with the statement and in

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essay

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i

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will explain with

example

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this

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morden

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modern

era, most

of

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the

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people are moving to urban areas for their studies,

work

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and work

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so they can have

better

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education and quality of life.

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,

population

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the population

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has increased and

individual

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individuals

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are

finding

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having

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difficulties

to find

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an

appartment

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apartment

. The government should

spent

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ob

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on

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byilding

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building

story

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apartment

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.

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impliment

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implement

will add value

in

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to

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community life and affordable rent.

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,

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in

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Bahrain, the leaders are providing houses, even

maintaing

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maintaining

a

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rent. so, each

an

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every resident can live happily. In the

world

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Bahrain

stand

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in

top

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ten countries for great housing facilities.

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trasportation

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transportation

is

essential

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part of the

infastructure

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infrastructure

and better

canactivity

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connectivity

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for the local people. For

instace

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instance

, Mumbai is one of the best

place

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to live and

most

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of the job opportunities but,

pepole

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people

are facing a lot of

issue

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to travel

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due to

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traffic

jam

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poor

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and poor

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highway

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highways

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and

road

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roads

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. The government need to spend on building new

highway

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and public transportation.

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group

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of

memebr

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members

member

will start to use

the

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public buses, which will add profit

an

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and

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facilities. In conclusion,

i

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believe, that government should start taking action

towords

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toward

house

storages

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storage

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and road development.

insted

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instead

,

sepending

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depending

spending

on the restoration of the

oold

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old

building and they can

significatly

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significantly

improve the lifestyle and consider as a long term development.