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The charts show what ik graduated and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college. Summer is the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show what ik graduated and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college. Summer is the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate how ik graduated and postgraduate admission who go into standing work did after ignoring university, as shown in two types of lines.
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, the chart shows four different bars (in millions), movements of graduate and postgraduate input after leaving college: a significant percentage pursued
further
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 studies or entered part-time work.
However
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, In 1987, the figures for
teachers
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 and students were almost the same, indicating a minimal difference. By 1992, the symbols of tutors.
feators
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features
. exceeded that of entry by 0.5%. Apart from the years 1997 and 2002, the sum of
teachers
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 continued to increase and remained higher than that of admissions stayed significantly lower and showed little difference over the years. In 2007,2012 and 2017,
further
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, the symbol of
teachers
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 continued to rise steadily,
whereas
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 the number of students increased only slightly. By the final year, the number of
teachers
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 had surpassed 70 million,
while
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words teachers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graduate
  • postgraduate
  • full-time work
  • part-time work
  • further studies
  • internships
  • volunteer work
  • career prospects
  • job market
  • academic pursuits
  • transition
  • employment opportunities
  • proportions
  • analysis
  • support systems
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