The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate and provide key information about changes that occurred in the city hospital from 2007 to 2010. The data is expressed as stations and roads.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that the hospital area became more modernized over the 3-year period.
In addition
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, the bus stop station had completely removed,
whereas
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city roads remained unchanged.
According to
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what is shown, the northern eastern ring road, a public car park was built in the area which allows more space in the traditional staff car park.
Additionally
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, the hospital road became more accessible as converted from a single rectangular to two roundabout shapes which serve in various directions.
Furthermore
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, in the southern western area, a new bus station is linked to the
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installed roads where the old bus stop stood out. The graph highlights a clear trend
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with these developments,
shows
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that the government authority prioritized modernization and residential expansion over maintaining an empty space.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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