The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons were relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons were relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane, summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons were relevant.
The diagram presents and de step-by-step manufacturing
process
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for making
sugar
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from sugarcane.
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, the
sugar
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manufacturing
process
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has 7 steps, starting
by
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growing the
sugar
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canes
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, and ending with drying and cooling the
sugar
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to
have
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the final product. The
process
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involve
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both human work and
machines
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machine
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work like
filter
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filters
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,
evaporator
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evaporators
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and
centrifuge
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centrifuges
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.
To begin
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with, the
process
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starts by growing the
sugar
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canes
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cane
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from 12 to 18 months (from a year to a year and 6 months). The second step is harvesting the
sugar
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canes
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cane
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whether it is by humans or by a machine. After that, the
sugar
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canes
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are crushed to make juice by a machine.
Then
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the juice is filtered by a limestone filter.
Next,
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the filtered juice is put in
evaporator
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over the heat to make syrup,
then
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the
sugar
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crystals are separated from the syrup by a centrifuge.
Finally
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, the
sugar
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is dried and cooled to
preduce
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produce
the final product.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, sugar, canes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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