The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

This

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line graph presents the Oytokumpu share price from January 2006 to December 2010.

Overall

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, we can notice that the line

is fluctuated

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fluctuates

has fluctuated

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The

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In the

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first year the Oytokumpu share price

reaches

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reached

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its peak

around

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at around

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30, and

eventually

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eventually,

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is fluctuated

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fluctuates

fluctuated

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again from 2007

till

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2008.

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, at the beginning of the year

2008

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2008,

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the price

hits

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hit

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it's

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its

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lowest point which was approximately 10. The

stuation

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situation

after that from 2009 to 2010 was unstable. In 2009 there was a small increase but,

this

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increase didn't

stay

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last

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too long. The line displays a gradual decrease until 2010 which suddenly appears a dramatic increase but that didn't

last

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long.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.

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4
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

106 words

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