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Band 3.5

A magazine wants to include conntributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me the most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter - describe what this book was about - explain how this book influenced you - say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear SIR, I hope
this
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 letter finds you well, I am Pooja, Practising Advocate, residing at Anna Nagar ,
chennai
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, which is the most prominent place in Thirumangalam. I have been living in
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 location for several months. I would like to share, The book that influenced me the most is Ponniyin Selvan, which
was write
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 by Kalki
krishnamurth
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Krishnamurth
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.
This
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 book
ias
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is
 about
"Chola
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the "Chola
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 Dynasty", the story revolves around royalty,
quest
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,
bitrayel
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betrayal
 and
power
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 of the crown.
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,
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 novel, talks about the
souther
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 part of Tamil Nadu and its history and heritage
where
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it
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apply
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would influence
younger
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the younger
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 generation about our native
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apply
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culture which is getting lost in 2025. I would be looking forward
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responce
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response
. Thank You Yours Faithfully Pooja

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coherence and cohesion
Try to organize your paragraphs better. Each paragraph should have one main idea.
task achievement
Make sure to use correct punctuation and grammar to make your points clear.
task achievement
Follow a more formal tone in your closing, such as 'Yours sincerely' if you know the name of the person.
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You gave a clear description of the book and its themes.
coherence and cohesion
You expressed your thoughts about the book's influence on younger generations.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • profound impact
  • tackles
  • racism
  • prejudice
  • injustice
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • struggles
  • challenges
  • injustices
  • discrimination
  • equality
  • power of perspective
  • biases
  • prejudices
  • unique story
  • passing judgment
  • moral message
  • memorable characters
  • role model
  • integrity
  • commitment to justice
  • voice for the voiceless
  • defender of truth
  • timeless themes
  • powerful storytelling
  • pressing social issues
  • relevant today
  • question the status quo
  • thought-provoking
  • inspiring
  • profound influence
  • shaped my perspective
  • creating a more just and equal world
  • impact and resonate
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