You recently moved to a new city, and you want to recommend a good restaurant to your friend who is visiting soon. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: describe the restaurant say where it is located explain why you recommend it

Dear Akash, I am writing a letter to inform you about a good cuisine which is Newley opened near my house, and you should visit
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tandoori grill restaurant
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is an
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restaurant which is newly opened In Bampton
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month and they have a lot of food varieties
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their menu like south
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dishes,
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traditional food
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on one plate you get an extra plate for your partner.
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, they have a bar inside
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so you can enjoy the drinks. It’s located
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near the 410 highway exit steels and airport opposite my new house where I currently
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. Now I
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this
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restaurant to you because I know the taste of your tongue
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you
like to eat
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spicy food so it’s
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best for you to eat
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spicy veg or
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dishes here and they have a
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lot of offers now going on
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open
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till the late night 2 or 3 am. So, I am waiting for your
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here and I want to
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the
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review of
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cuisine from you. Your lovingly
jaideep
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coherence and cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea and clearly supports your main point.
task achievement
Add more details about the restaurant's atmosphere or special dishes to enhance your recommendation.
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You clearly described the restaurant and its location, which is helpful for your friend.
suitable writing tone
Your writing has a friendly tone, which is great for a letter to a friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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