23 May 2025, The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and 2024. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.

23 May 2025, The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and 2024. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for 23 May 2025, The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and 2024. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate the development and improvements of a
school
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site between 2004 and 2024.
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, there were improvements in infrastructure and student capacity
while
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part of the woodland area was retained. In 2004, there was only one car park
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in
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the western corner of the area, close to the main entrance.
In
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that time, the
school
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could accommodate 600 students, with two
schools
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school
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buildings that were separated by
path
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a path
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running from the main entrance to the sports field. The rest of the site was surrounded by woodland, extending from the south to the northeast and behind the first
school
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building. In 2024, an additional car park was built on the east side, connected by a road to the original car park and the main entrance. The sports field was relocated to the south of parking area number 2,
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its original site was turned into the third
school
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building. The two existing buildings were joined together, and the old path connected them to the new building, increasing the
school
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’s capacity to 1000 students.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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