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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the
amount
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 of
waste
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, measured in
tonnes
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, produced by three companies:
company
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 A,
company
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B
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, and
company
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C
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, between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
amount
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 of
waste
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 produced by companies A and
B
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 decreased between 2000 and 2015,
whereas
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company
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C
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 experienced a significant increase. At the beginning of the period,
company
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 A reached a peak of 12
tonnes
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 in 2000, but
this
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 figure declined rapidly to approximately 9
tonnes
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 by the end of the period. In terms of
waste
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 production,
company
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B
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also
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 reached its peak in 2005 at 10
tonnes
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;
however
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, over the following 10 years, the
amount
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 steadily declined to 3
tonnes
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, the lowest level recorded.
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,
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company
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Company
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C
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 began as the lowest producer of
waste
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, at 3
tonnes
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 in 2000, but the
amount
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 increased considerably over the years, eventually surpassing both companies A and
B
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. By 2015,
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company
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Company
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C
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 had become the largest producer of
waste
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, at approximately 10
tonnes
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, waste, tonnes, company, b, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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