The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides key data about estimating the world illiteracy rate by country and Male or Female in the year 2024. the units are measured in percentages.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is clear from the graph that South Asia had the largest Female percentage.
In addition
Linking Words
, for Latin American and Caribbean, both genders were almost similar,
whereas
Linking Words
, Developed Countries had the lowest ratio for
men
Use synonyms
and women.
According to
Linking Words
what is shown, South Asia had the biggest amount for women nearly 55% and
men
Use synonyms
had a lower percentage 34%.
However
Linking Words
, in the Arab States, Females were higher than males by 52%, and in Sub-Saharan Africa, girls were almost 48%, decreasing the number for
men
Use synonyms
a
one third
Add a hyphen
one-third
show examples
In terms of East Asia/Oceania,
men
Use synonyms
were insignificant a tenth and women were a fifth,
However
Linking Words
, in Latin American/Caribbean and Developed countries, both genders were nearly 12 per cent and 2 per cent respectively.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
What to do next:
Look at other essays: