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The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

The diagram shows the recycling process of wasted
glass
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bottles
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. It explains how used
bottles
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 are collected, cleaned, and reused to produce new
bottles
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 for sale.
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, the recycling process has three main stages. It starts with the collection and cleaning of used
glass
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bottles
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, followed by melting and shaping in a factory, and ends with the
bottles
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 being filled and sold in shops again. In the first stage, wasted
glass
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bottles
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 are collected and taken to a recycling point.
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, they are transported to a cleaning station where high-pressure water is used to wash them. After cleaning, the
bottles
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 are sorted into three color groups: brown, green, and clear.
Next,
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the sorted
bottles
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 are crushed into small pieces. These
glass
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 pieces are
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 sent to a
glass
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 factory. Inside the factory, they are melted in a furnace at a temperature between 600°C and 800°C. The recycled liquid
glass
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, sometimes mixed with new liquid
glass
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, is poured into
molds
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moulds
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 to form new
bottles
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.
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, the new
bottles
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 are filled with drinks, transported to supermarkets, and made ready for sale.

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introduction conclusion present
Include a conclusion summarizing the main points.
logical structure
Use linking words to connect ideas better, for example, 'firstly,' 'next,' and 'finally.'
relevant specific examples
Add more specific examples or numbers to show how many bottles are recycled.
clear comprehensive ideas
The essay explains the process clearly and in order.
supported main points
The main stages of the recycling process are described well.

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