Life expectancy is steadily increasing every year. Longevity is a blessing and an onus.
Thus
, for the individuals enjoying a longer life, for the society profiting from their experience, and even for the economy with a new silver market. Linking Words
However
, we cannot ignore the familiar and social challenge that providing suitable care to elderly people involves. Linking Words
Government
should provide enough public resources to manage Correct article usage
The government
successful
Change the adjective
successfully
this
life period.
Progress in medical science, social improvements and lifestyle choices, have made Linking Words
possible
to live longer. Often in an active and positive way. Correct pronoun usage
it possible
For instance
, after retirement, many people could spend more time with their family, try new Linking Words
hobbits
, travel or widen their circle of friends. Correct your spelling
hobbies
Furthermore
, from the Linking Words
society
perspective, they can use their expertise Replace the word
societal
volunteering
. On top of that, the Change preposition
in volunteering
called
“silver economy” Verb problem
apply
increase
creating new business areas to answer the needs of Wrong verb form
increased
the
retired individuals. As can be seen, living more could be interesting and productive.
Correct article usage
apply
Nevertheless
, it is essential to Linking Words
acknowledged
that social evidence shows many drawbacks. As an example, aged people suffer more health problems, sometimes have their mobility, sight or hearing impaired and they need help to perform Change the form of the verb
acknowledge
dairy
activities. Correct your spelling
daily
Therefore
, they are a burden to their family and being Linking Words
take
care Wrong verb form
taken
Change preposition
of require
require
a lot of money that they usually don’t have. There are needed more social resources to cope with the situation
Correct subject-verb agreement
requires
To sum up
, Linking Words
elderly
years may be full of pleasant things. Correct article usage
the elderly
However
, health Linking Words
issue
could mean a big charge to the family andFix the agreement mistake
issues
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