The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart displays information about the global approximated
illiteracy
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rates by region and sex for the previous year. The x-axis represents the various territories,
while
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the y-axis indicates the
illiteracy
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levels.
Overall
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, the
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levels increased for both genders generally over the past year. People in developed countries were the least illiterate,
while
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South Asians had the highest
illiteracy
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levels. In Developed countries, Latin American and Caribbean countries, and East Asia and Oceania males and females had 0, a little over 10, less than 10, and 20
illiteracy
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values respectively.
On the other hand
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, men and women in Sub-Saharan African, Arab states and South Asian territories had
illiteracy
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rates of 30,45, a little under 30, just above 50, 35 and 55 in the same order.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words illiteracy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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