The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows the
number
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of
people
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participating in
five
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different activities at a social centre located in Melbourne, Australia over a
twenty-year old
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period from 2000 to 2020.
Overall
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, it is obvious that
members
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of film club remained relatively the same over the covered period. The
number
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of
people
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engaging in the field of material arts
also
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reached the same
at the
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end
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with just some changes in the middle ten
years
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from 2005 to 2015.
In contrast
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, the
number
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of
people
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in three other groups including amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances went under significant fluctuations. The
number
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of
people
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taking part in amateur dramatics and table tennis activities followed almost an opposite pattern.
Members
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of the amateur dramatics group were
initially
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about 26
people
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which raised a little bit in the following
five
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years
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to almost 30
members
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in 2005 and
then
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experienced a sharp continuous fall until the
end
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of 2020 to less than 10
members
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.
On the other hand
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, individuals playing table tennis were almost 17 at first which raised gradually to twenty persons in 2010 and
then
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increased rapidly to almost 55
members
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at the
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end
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. Ultimately, as you can see no one participated in musical performances in the first
five
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years
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which suddenly increased to about 11
members
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in the following
five
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years
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and
then
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continued to grow at a slow pace until the
end
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of the period when it reached 20
members
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, five, members, end, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rates
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable numbers
  • fluctuations
  • overall participation
  • comparison
  • activities
  • social centre
  • Melbourne
  • participants
  • highlight
  • report
  • graph illustrates/demonstrates
  • 20-year period
  • key features
  • main features
  • statistical data
  • variations
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