You have received a letter from your landlord, Mr Matthews, asking you to renew your contract and pay more rent. You are happy in the property but the landlord has not been maintaining it well. Write a reply to Mr Matthews. In your letter: • indicate your intention to stay • give information about the maintenance issues • explain what you would like the landlord to do now.

Dear Mr Matthews, I hope
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letter finds you in good health. I am writing
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letter regarding the renewal of the house contract and rent enhancement.
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,
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want to express that
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am extremely happy to continue my stay in your property and you have mentioned
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the amount of rent increase,
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am satisfied with that too. Moving forward,
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want to discuss
about
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some problems
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had
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faced in the past
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related
to the services. The biggest issue is the
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laundry
machine as it
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not working properly
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two months. I have been asking for its repair
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a long period and
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believe that sent you two letters to look into
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problem. But the issue
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unresolved till today and
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is really
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inconvenient
, as
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have been doing my
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laundry
in a
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laundry
store.
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, as the
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already here, I have witnessed so many insects
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the property and they are harming the place.
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, It would be very
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if you could replace the washing machine or get it repaired.
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, if you would provide a pest control service to avoid the
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hustle
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. I completely understand that every person
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busy
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schedules
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, but
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would be grateful if you would take some time out to look into the matter. Regards,
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ABC

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task achievement
Make sure to address each issue clearly and directly.
coherence and cohesion
Try to use linking words (like 'firstly', 'next') to guide the reader through your ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that every paragraph has one main idea to avoid confusion.
task achievement
You clearly express your happiness to stay in the property.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is polite and respectful.
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