You have received a letter from your landlord, Mr Matthews, asking you to renew your contract and pay more rent. You are happy in the property but the landlord has not been maintaining it well. Write a reply to Mr Matthews. In your letter: • indicate your intention to stay • give information about the maintenance issues • explain what you would like the landlord to do now.

Dear Mr Matthews, I hope

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letter finds you in good health. I am writing

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letter regarding the renewal of the house contract and rent enhancement.

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want to express that

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am extremely happy to continue my stay in your property and you have mentioned

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the amount of rent increase,

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am satisfied with that too. Moving forward,

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want to discuss

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some problems

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had

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faced in the past

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to the services. The biggest issue is the

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laundry

machine as it

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not working properly

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two months. I have been asking for its repair

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a long period and

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believe that sent you two letters to look into

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problem. But the issue

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unresolved till today and

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is really

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inconvenient

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have been doing my

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laundry

in a

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store.

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, as the

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already here, I have witnessed so many insects

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the property and they are harming the place.

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, It would be very

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if you could replace the washing machine or get it repaired.

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hustle

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. I completely understand that every person

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schedules

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would be grateful if you would take some time out to look into the matter. Regards,

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ABC

n.rouniwal001

May 24, 2025

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task achievement

Make sure to address each issue clearly and directly.

coherence and cohesion

Try to use linking words (like 'firstly', 'next') to guide the reader through your ideas.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that every paragraph has one main idea to avoid confusion.

task achievement

You clearly express your happiness to stay in the property.

suitable writing tone

The tone of your letter is polite and respectful.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

223 words

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