Some people think that the time and money spent on the protection of wild animals should be spent on improving humans’ quality of life instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is sometimes argued that the time and funds allocated to wild animal conservation should be used to enhance human living standards.

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I agree that human needs should undoubtedly take

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precedence

, I firmly believe that

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for the protection of wild animals should not be entirely cut, as it is essential for human well-being and long-term success. On the one hand, it is understandable that some portion of

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currently spent on protecting

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could be redirected to human needs.

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is because there are still many social issues that remain urgent,

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as unemployment, poverty, crime, and an ageing population. Meanwhile, in many developing countries, public services, including education, healthcare, infrastructure, and military

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are all underfunded. Without reasonable money and effort to tackle these social problems, it can result in social instability and even affect national development.

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, governments might be overwhelmed by

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social unrest, which

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their ability to converse

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animals.

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, despite the significance of prioritising human life, I contend that allocating sufficient time and funds to

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wildlife

conservation

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indispensable for sustainable development. First of all, there is a complex interconnection between wild creatures and nature.

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means that the

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could be negatively impacted if we do not invest enough

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to protect them.

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, more and more species may become endangered and even extinct without human intervention, which aims to ban

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activities like overhunting or overharvesting.

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can not only directly

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the biodiversity but

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adversly

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affect the plants that depend on these species.

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, the deterioration of ecosystems will accelerate

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environmental issues,

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as global warming, ultimately leading to catastrophic consequences

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. From an economic perspective,

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reserves can contribute to ecotourism, which plays an important role in supporting

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the economy

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.

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, many tourists around the world are attracted to African Savannah to see spectacular animal migrations every year, generating significant revenue

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the local communities and other relevant

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industries

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like aviation.

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shows that saving

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with adequate

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can

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increase funding for countries to improve

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quality of living.

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, protecting wild

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animals

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is not a charity but a long-term

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investment

, which will eventually return to humans. In conclusion,

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some effort and funds could be redirected to address social problems and contemporary human needs, I maintain that guaranteeing moderate time and fiscal

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for

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conservation is critical. A balanced and careful resource allocation is the key to

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the coexistence between humanity and the natural world, leading to a win-win situation in the long run.