The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

The bar chart provides information about the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product ,agriculture,industry and services, between 1960 and 2000.

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, agriculture experienced an upward trend

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it decreased sharply after ,

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it became the lowest rate ,

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Services showed a significant rise leading to the highest cycle between the three , over the period the industry just showed some fluctuations .

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The bar chart below shows the sector contributions to India's gross domestic product from 1960 to 2000.

Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve the situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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