Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment?

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who know the prominent of protecting the
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has increased.
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, they believe that they
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to try themselves about it.
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the
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and solutions.
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, I think the two main
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irresponsible
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they are unaware of
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issue. So I believe that the most influential solution should be taken by
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and by advertising.
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, one of the most important
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is some
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are irresponsible,
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the fact that they believe that, by paying taxes to
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, they do not need to do something to protect the
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and the planet by themselves.
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, they think it is the responsibility of some special staff
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of their salary which the
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pay them.
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, another reason that should be mentioned is
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's unawareness.
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, they do not how are they able to preserve of planet.
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, they do not know about the consequences of their behaviour and how can their activities impact
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the
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in the long term. So, for the
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that
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previously mentioned, The main solution for
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issue is the
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should encourage
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by some advertising on billboards and on social media to cooperate with them to protect the
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, and if they do it, the
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will pay some presents and decrease their taxes.
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, they are able to illustrate some TV programs and documentaries
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"National Geography" to aware
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of some topics about ecosystems, climate change and sustainability to make them more interested. In conclusion, the two main
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are
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's irresponsibility and
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's unawareness about the consequences of
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issue.
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the end, the main solution for these
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in my opinion is, the
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should show some documentaries and TV programs, not only to
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but
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them by increasing the taxes.
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the fact that
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way will help all
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in the future.

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You identify important reasons for people's lack of action on environmental issues.
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