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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Assel

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Assel
The two maps compare the
lay out
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layout
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 of an island, before and after
development
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the development
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 of some
visitors
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visitor's
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 amenities.
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, the island has become a commercial zone with a number of modernised facilities and new constructions.
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 the eastern part of
island
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the island
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 and palms have remained untouched over the time period. Currently, the area has been commercialised by developing the pier, becoming a comfortable place for sailing boats. In the centre of
land
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the land
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, there is a reception surrounded by a vehicle track, which leads to the pier and restaurant above. A wide range of accommodations,
on the other hand
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, have been constructed in a trendy marine style, on the both eastern and western sides. Those houses are connected with each other by footpaths, which
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 laid to the beach. The coast is convenient for tourists to swim now as it is located in the sea.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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