The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The plans display the
southwest
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Southwest
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airport in its current form and its next
year
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development plan.
Overall
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, the air will be expanded to allow for more
gates
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.
Additionally
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, new facilities will be added,
such
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as
sky
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the sky
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train, to make it
conveniante
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convenient
for travelers. Currently, both the
departures
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and
arrivals
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building
contains
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contain
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only one door. Inside the
departures
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building, people could
check-in
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check in
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in the left corner before security, and on the other side there
a
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is a
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cafe.
On the other hand
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, the
arrivals
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does
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do
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not have any facilities. After passing the security and passport control in the middle, there is a block that
have
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has
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eight
gates
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and a walkway. After the new redevelopments, the number of doors in both the
departures
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and
arrivals
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building will be increased to four. Inside the
departures
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building, the cafe will relocated to
bottom-left
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the bottom-left
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corner and check-in will be relocated to its original space. A new bag drop will replace the old check-in space.
Where as
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Whereas
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the
arrivals
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, will have a new rental car, an ATM, and a cafe on the right side. After passing the security and passport control,
a new shops
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a new shop
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will be
introducted
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introduced
. The
gates
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block will
be have
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have
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a
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apply
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two split paths on the right and the left to allow for more
gates
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and the walkway will be replaced by
Sky
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a Sky
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train.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words gates, departures, arrivals with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • town
  • airport
  • built
  • beach
  • houses
  • shops
  • facilities
  • expanded
  • tourism
  • construction
  • roads
  • access
  • travelers
  • population
  • developed
  • job opportunities
  • residential area
  • quiet
  • bustling
  • visitors
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