The diagram shows the life cycle of the brown, white, pink shrimps in the Gulf of Mexico. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram shows the life cycle of the brown, white, pink shrimps in the Gulf of Mexico. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows the life cycle of the brown, white, pink shrimps in the Gulf of Mexico. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The illustration demonstrates the life span of three species
dominate
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the Gulf of Mexico’s commercial shrimp harvest. It is observed that the process consists of multiple stages, beginning with
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apply
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egg production and ending with the coming back to the
ocean
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to reproduce. First of all, the eggs
laid
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in the
ocean
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, which hatch within 24 hours into nauplius. These develop into
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protozoa
protozoan
before becoming mysis. These early forms are considered plankton and are carried along by wind and
ocean
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currents towards the land.
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, the larvae enter the postlarva stage and eventually grow into juveniles. Marshes provide protection and food for survival and growth. Before the step of becoming
mature
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adults
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,
it
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one
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must go through the
sub-adults
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sub-adult
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stage. During
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time, shrimp begin to migrate from bays back to the
ocean
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and become fully mature within two to four months. Adult shrimp continue to live in the
ocean
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, and their life
span
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up to two years. During
this
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period, they begin to reproduce and
then
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start a new life span.

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