The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays how much
does
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a person
pay
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for doing
research
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on renewable power in
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UK
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the UK
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,
Spain
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,
Denmark
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, and Switzerland from 1975 to 2000.
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, Switzerland did
came
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in first among the other countries in
amount
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the amount
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of spent
into researching
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on research
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. Following it,
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and
in
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last
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both
Spain
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and the
UK
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. In 1975, all countries
payed
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paid
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zero dollars
regarding
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the
research
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. Switzerland showed a gradual increase in
the
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how they pay for
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research
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during the whole period. Reaching almost five dollars per person
at the end
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in
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2000.
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the
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Denmark
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total spending started to rise from 1990 after it experienced
a
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constant growth. In 2000,
the
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Denmark
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was
putting
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3.5 dollars per person for
the
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research
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. The
UK
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and
Spain
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did share almost the same trends during the period from 1975 to 2000. They both raised from zero dollar to one dollar in 1980. Later on, they witness a
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of drops and rises. In 1990, the spent money
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Spain
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did reach
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its lowest,
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the
UK
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had it is highest. In 2000, the records showed an amount of less than one dollar spent
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both the
UK
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and
Spain
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words research, uk, spain, denmark with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • spending
  • expenditure
  • investments
  • renewable energy
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • growth rates
  • comparative analysis
  • data representation
  • research funding
  • energy sources
  • historical trends
  • country comparison
  • significant changes
  • period under review
  • increase/decrease
  • economic implications
  • environmental impact
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