Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that all university

students

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study

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whatever they desire, since it will

improves

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productivity.

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, others believe that they need to focus on crucial

subjects

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including science and technology that will come in handy in future

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because

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They

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will help to solve future issues of

the

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humanity. I will discuss both

opinion

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opinions

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before explaining why

students

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should

study

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a subject that they prefer. First and foremost, studying a

profeciency

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proficiency

that you like will

effect

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affect

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possitively

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positively

to your

study

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efficiency.

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is because, by

this

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, you are not only learning a knowledge that you have to, but

also

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the information that you are

intersted

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interested

in. If you force

students

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study

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subject

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subjects

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that they do not want, the

rusults

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results

might not be

stisfactory

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satisfactory

, as they are doing

the

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apply

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thing

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things

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that oppose

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apply

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their desire.

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, in Nigeria,

Students

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are

forsed

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forced

study

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subjects

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that

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are related

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to technology, because

government

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the government

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wanted

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to make

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it more

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modern

compare

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compared

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to other nations.

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, It would not go well: the amount of

absence

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students

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in classes had increased and the class'

avarange

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average

scores

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tests had

decresed

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decreased

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, in order to solve inevitable

diasasters

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disasters

and problems

such

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as global warming and space limitation

due to

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overpopulation. Since Those issues are humanity's main concern, we have to put them on the first line.

however

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, they require advanced technology to overcome, as more

peole

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people

have to engage with it.

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, One of the largest inner

sea

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which is located in Uzbekistan

start

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to significantly

evoparate

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evaporate

due to

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global

warning

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warming

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. After almost drained, most

students

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began to

involve

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this

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delimma

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dilemma

and

start

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started

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study

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chemistry and other

subjects

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that

can

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could

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solve

this

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problem,

as a

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result

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result,

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they

able

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were able

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to stop evaporation by finding

solution

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solutions

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, because of

increased

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the increased

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amount of

those kind

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that kind

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profficionals

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professionals

, they

ultimatly overcomed

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ultimately overcome

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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327 words

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

When employers choose the best person for job they should consider personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government should spend money on railways rahter than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Wriggling critters armed with enzymes can break down plastics that would otherwise take decades, or even centuries to degrade.

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?