You and your neighbors have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have become quite bad. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter: -Explain what you have recently experienced . -Explain what your neighbors recently experienced . -Ask what action will be taken to improve the service.

Dear Sir , I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the waste management service which is poor and miserable in the city of Cambridge . My name is Harvi and I am living at 41 Munch Avenue Cambridge ,

last

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week no one from your staff came to

pick-up

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pick up

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the garbage from our street ,

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every Wednesday has been allocated for

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area to

pick-up

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the trash.

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due to

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the torrential weather and high wind

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the waste was scattered on the road which made a difficult situation for the neighbours and drivers . It is my humble request to improvise your service and send your employees to collect the waste before the environment

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unpleasant to live

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also

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the situation become worse and my neighbour had rushed to the hospital because he was diagnosed with malaria which is caused by the filthy garbage

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, he has hired a people who took the trash to the main branch in order to get some relief. I assert

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issue will be addressed at the earliest. Yours faithfully. Harvi

Kaurharvinder2984Wed May 28 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly explain the problem in a more organized way. Start with your experience, then your neighbors'.

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Use a warmer tone in your request to make it sound more polite. For example, say 'I kindly ask' instead of 'I assert'.

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You included personal experiences which made the letter relatable.

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Your letter had a clear purpose, which was to address the rubbish collection issue.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

184 words

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