You and your neighbors have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have become quite bad. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter: -Explain what you have recently experienced . -Explain what your neighbors recently experienced . -Ask what action will be taken to improve the service.

Dear Sir , I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to the waste management service which is poor and miserable in the city of Cambridge . My name is Harvi and I am living at 41 Munch Avenue Cambridge ,

last

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week no one from your staff came to

pick-up

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pick up

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the garbage from our street ,

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every Wednesday has been allocated for

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area to

pick-up

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the trash.

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due to

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the torrential weather and high wind

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the waste was scattered on the road which made a difficult situation for the neighbours and drivers . It is my humble request to improvise your service and send your employees to collect the waste before the environment

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unpleasant to live

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also

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the situation become worse and my neighbour had rushed to the hospital because he was diagnosed with malaria which is caused by the filthy garbage

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, he has hired a people who took the trash to the main branch in order to get some relief. I assert

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issue will be addressed at the earliest. Yours faithfully. Harvi

Kaurharvinder2984Wed May 28 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly explain the problem in a more organized way. Start with your experience, then your neighbors'.

task achievement

Use a warmer tone in your request to make it sound more polite. For example, say 'I kindly ask' instead of 'I assert'.

task achievement

You included personal experiences which made the letter relatable.

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Your letter had a clear purpose, which was to address the rubbish collection issue.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

184 words

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