Some think that teenagers should follow older people’s rules.other think that it is natural for them to challenge what older people say.discuss both views and give your opinion

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recent era, how to seek

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generation has been a topical issue since some individuals believe that older

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are the most suitable group that can give the appropriate

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to them but others think the youth should trust their own perception. In response to

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issue, I will give

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based on both sides and argue that the first aforementioned opinion is more convincing

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the welfare.

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, adolescents prefer

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not obey to their parents because they precisely know what they want and how they will reach their goals.

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is because some old

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tend to judge decisions based on their

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and experience without observing first.

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, in

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argument, ignoring

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their parents

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parents

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advice

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is the best way for them, and

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they

choose

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decisions by themselves.

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, when the youth seek jobs, they choose a painter

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their job, not an accountant as they know their strength and

weeknesses

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weaknesses

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generation

prefer

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to opt

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in which they will excel.

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argument is misleading since they do not see

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broaden

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lack

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economic resources for supporting families, and

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will make them more stressed. Moving to another argument, asking

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from parents or older

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will guide us to get a better life because

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generation has a broad mindset.

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point of

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come from a complicated experience that they passed and the knowledge they got.

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,

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given by them will be

currated

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curated

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deep consideration.

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education,

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older individuals will give a recommendation not only based on passion but

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the

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opportunity to live better,

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as

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career opportunities and some benefits they get. So

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young

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will be prevented from getting

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because of financial problems or unemployment

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.

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, even though not taking advance from the old

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can lead

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precise decision

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this

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will give drawbacks in the

future

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.

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, another side is more convincing as they will have better

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thoroughly

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consideration by applying

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from older

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